~30~ Chapters review. Why should you start reading this book? Because it's great of course! More seriously, I've read the other books of our dear author, so here is what I can tell you: - Author knows what he is doing, it's not his first shot. - Author knows how to write a novel in a more than DECENT ENGLISH and his writing is FLUID, things that unfortunately very few webnovels can boast about, especially in early chapters - Over the last few years, author has proven that he was capable of publishing multiple chapters daily. He won't disappear or go on a 6-months hiatus. - 1chap/day will probably increase in the near future after the author finishes one of his other books.If you like eastern fantasy, give a try to his other books, they are great, not flawless but they will entertain you! Now, what about THIS novel?I had some reservations about the 'system' tag because I find that systems in novels more often than not remove agency from the mc, make his growth unnatural and authors don't know how to balance that later in the story.So I'm relieved that this is a 'light system' so far, it is not some godlike entity granting op bonus only to our mc.Mixing evolution, system, apocalypse, and cultivation is a breath of fresh air!I hope author will find the right balance throughout the novel. It reminds me of 'The Oracle Paths' a little bit, but the two novels are still very different. Characters are compelling, no major flaw there so far. I don't think there will be any harem.I hope author will introduce more side characters not existing only through our mc, the very best novels also shine thanks to their original side characters, I know that it's sometimes hard to balance as the story still has to focus on one mc.I wish that our mc will continue to grow differently compared to the mcs from the author's other books, we readers like variations in our characters' personality.Overall this has been a very enjoyable 30 chapters read, I recommend everyone to give it a try, you won't regret it! This novel has the potential for top 10, I'm certain of it. PS: I hope Dyon can work faster, Dimensional Descent also needs 3 chapters a day!
the mc is an ace soldier who is the best according to the author but in truth he's such a retarded blabbermouth idiot who can't even keep a secret.the fmc ask him to never tell anyone, anysoul about their relationship and this retarded mc promised not to tell anyone and in the next chapter this retarded mc opened his mouth and immediately tell the others about his relationship to the fmc even though the others dont believed him. ace soldier tskk it should be ace retard
I don't usually write a review because for me, as a reader, finds it not worthy of my precious time. If I find good novels, then I'd just commend it in my mind. However, I was taken aback while reading this. It was a well-written story with great potential. This definitely deserves my 5.0 rating.Rejoice, for I, who has an unfathomable taste in novels, have commended you. I hope you continue this story and grow more as a writer.
The first 100 chapters or so are really good, with interesting characters and world design. The plot holes and unrealistic actions of those in this cultivation world gets progressively worse though, the author clearly understands how a cultivator world should be and tries to change it to make everything feel more modern both in the culture and the way everyone reacts. This doesn't work very well, it instead makes the world and the people in it feel shallow and dragged along by random desicion making. The plot and idea behind it is really good though and I was really interested in how it would go throughout the "Tutorial" he was in. But alot of the systems and feature are disregarded or make no sense and destroy the story. My biggest gripes were the loyalty system and how he supposedly rewrites the " yin slaves" memories but that left their personalities cause otherwise they would be boring. WHICH the author correctly writes them as just that, slaves with no control but some personality. Later though the author has some character's completely disregard their loyalty stat and the fact they are yin slaves who aren't supposed to be able to betray or harm their master unless ordered to in extremely obnoxious and plot hole inducing stupity that adds drama and moves the story along by disregarding everything mentioned before in the story.All in all, the author somehow took a good story and characters up to the 70~chapter mark and then started adding plot holes, contradicting himself and making shallow characters that make random decisions that anyone can tell are forced into the story to make the story move in a different direction.
Writing quality: quite goodStory development: A little bit basic for a sign in novel, feels more like S.O.LCharacter design: Typical cn mc, very dumb for my taste, updating stability: ... seriously broWorld background: Till where i read, world description is very... foggy. Try it and you'll know what i mean Now whether you wqnt to read or not is up to you but in my case I don't recommend,Till next book we meet brethrens
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