The Kingdom of Arthos

I really like this story and I hope it continues on for quite a bit. Thanks for the good read👌 Also why do you have to make it so. You need 140 characters

Three hours: a gamble of time is definitely the right title for this book. only in this book, i smell poetry, sci-fi. The world background is excellent and the diction to which every event is portray is top notch. Nice work author.  

up till now goodlet's wait for the update

Author, I loved your story, it's obvious that there is potential, lots of potential, seeping from your novel. The only thing lacking is um, how do I say this? Ah yes, a narrative technique. It's evident from the synopsis that you lack a narrative technique. Please don't treat this as criticism, merely feedback to make your story even better! I love the concept, the worldbuilding, but the story could use some descriptions. For a beginning author, your writing is quite good, and I believe you should keep writing because practice makes perfect :) Good luck and kudos to you!

"Of course, this is all real bud. I told you I am part of you now. I usually remain dormant and just listen to your hilarious thoughts" Xennor said.

3) Act (insert number) in my book(s) mean chapter __

"You're back! You're back I was so scared you were gone forever please don't leave me! Why were gone for so long!"(Uta)

*Sigh* "Alright, a cub really doesn't know the  dangers of the world. Very well, I am in need of meat but what I require isn't ordinary meat. I need five pieces of wolf meat. Although wolves are ferocious, their meat is equally as delicious and tender. Bring me back the wolf meat I require and I'll consider giving you a copy of my very own cook book."