The Human Experiment

May be this is one of my father's customer  Lia was thinking while looking Madam Sumi's open behavior.

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Shameless self-review. Peak fiction for cultured people∼ (Also tricked you with a spoiler tag for no reason XD)                             

I hope that it's not those conquering, and too much overpowered mc from the start of the story, because those things are getting boring. but either way, i like this one

hopefully you will continue writing this masterpiece 🙂

this author is no better than GhostyZ. He is only releasing this on patrion now. the only difference is that this author's book is actually good compared to the absolute horse dung that GhostyZ  is releasing.

An interesting first five chapters that does a decent job of set up the mystery of who the main characters are and what they seemed to have become. Along with starting of why they became that way in the fifth chapter.

A MC with the powers of a transforming Druid is a pretty novel idea. Story is a nice chill read, but no more than that. A lot of times the reader is not given need information. An example is stars, which boosts the damage of skills used depending on chance. Author just randomly mentions it in a skill description, and doesn't even explain what they are or how you get them. It is inferred you get them from killing NPCs? But that's the problem, I'm not even 100% sure if that's how you get them. Could be combo score for all I know. A lot of plot holes for the sake of convivence too. The MC literally hits a one in one billion chance to upgrade an item to +30. No build up, it just happens. The main female lead's story with the MC just happens waaaaaay too quick as well. No build up to the reveal.

This is dope asf, I've expected it to be like a common story but I found it very interesting fosho Hahahahahahahaha  I hope you release more faster than my dad leaving me