For a second there I forgot I'm a shameless author and it's my duty to review my book with a 5 star... *Ahem* Anyway, this will be a qna review so, ask your queries away dear readers.
Terrible writing, awful story, childish characters, absurb story flow, ridiclous plot holes. 100% trash, don't read it. The MC is your average high school boy that all of sudden become top class hit man able to kill a small group of gang around 20 members eventhough he is never have any training or knowledge about any weapons whatsoever yet he can use any weapons like expert.The MC is high school student and yet he got blush and emotional over holding hand with a female classmate like 11 years old will do.There is no explanation whatsoever about the app itself like how it able to have all sort of OP features, so overall it feel so absurb and rushed.Everyone seem so indifferent toward killing someone else as if it is a game eventhough it already state as being the real world.There is world building at all, the enemies are also one dimensional goons while some are merely to add the words count so overall nothing matter.All in all, don't read this trash.
I haven't read all the store yet but how do you mess up a synopsis this much the main character is in fact male I get there she and he looked the same but all you have to do is read the name and the way the other characters interact with the person and you know it's male or female
Honestly speaking, I'm not a fun of sci fic but this novel got me glued to my seat. Such a wonderful plot and art work author author. Thumps up and keep up with the good works.
Gabriella and her father were busy arriving at the forbidden land as they were passing through all the once beautiful and enormous building structures and all the city streets and houses once built there you could see what this intense war had caused. Cities and buildings in a ruble and just ash scattered everywhere. They got out of the car and her father took out the materials needed to do the ceremony and he was speaking to her as well as he did this, "Gabriella have you ever wondered how your whole family were water people but you could control 2 elements?" Gabriella looked at her father all confused and was about to answer as they heard the horn blow in the far distance. This was the twins starting the meeting.You could hear voices emanating from this area and people cheering. "father I have wondered this but mother always told me I was special and I got this from grandpa." "No Gabriella the twins are your half brothers, Your mother and I had a falling out a few years ago and we seperated for a while and she had an affair with the king who was a prince at the time" Gabriella looked puzzled and shocked and was about to cry when they heard screams emanating from the castle they gazed upon the castle and witnessed all the people fighting against one another.
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