Seems like it’s written by an amateur writer. Many grammatical errors. Some sentences don’t make any sense. Still at the beginning of the book so maybe it gets better!? If it is written by an amateur then it’s great! So far the story line tracks and I can’t wait to keep reading!
I'm sorry, but that's a lot of violence in the first 10 chapters. I feel sick to my stomach right now, having read about her tail being bitten off. Imagine, someone taking half of your spine.
I finished the book and it sucked. It started ok w grammar errors and shit. I started getting into it, then all of a sudden a lot happened too soon and shit went downhill for me. Still a good book if you’re not picky and don’t mind amateurs. Very disappointed w the ending and who she mated w.
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