The Hero Became a Pyschopath

Stupid mc. Trash novel.   140 characters mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm

The story starts off very well and progresses with fluid high points, but as soon as chapter 41 starts grammatical errors constantly appear. The biggest problem is the he/she description where a grandma is a he or the main character referenced as male from the beginning starts being referred to as she. Before publishing any writen literature get someone to proof read. If I knew how bad the book would turn out never would have spent the time to read.

Nice one characters  awesome good building on world background decent characters evil mind sheming everywhetr this is good novel süper bi seri hikayesi karakterleri  akıl oyunlar çok op toz pempe bi dünya yok

Thx for these book. It’s very interesting. I gues the most interesting among similar. The plot at start isn’t significant, but you receive very clever and lucky hero (not always), which try to farm money for live by playing games.

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Just for clarification, is this a genderbender

It’s pretty good so as long as you do not scenes up it will continue to be good so yea just don’t screw It’s pretty good so as long as you do not scenes up it will continue to be good so yea just don’t screw It’s pretty good so as long as you do not scenes up it will continue to be good so yea just don’t screw up

Review for a read till chapter 3.The style of writing is not really unique, childish perhaps. No real way around it besides constant writing. The review is more for aspects outside of Grammer. I hope youll stick to writing and deliver quality works in the future.The initial chapters bored me, something a Prologue should strive to be the opposite. The story was spread too wide, many days flying by with not much going on. Its best to start off the prologue with something exciting, thrilling, something to make the readers look forward to the next chapter. The nightmare is interesting but nothing urgent or thought provoking is happening. Character actions are simply written for the sake of it. Karma goes to school, does this, does that. There is no personality. I want to know who I am following in the story. There is a difference between 'Karma ate dinner and went to bed' vs 'Karma begrudgingly shoved a spoonful of spinach into his mouth. He swallowed it whole, an action that almost choked him to death. The taste was never pleasant. He had once blamed his mother for the taste. After many attempts of his own cooking, there was no saving it. The plant was simply never made to be eaten.'. There is a lot more personality in the latter.