Story has a good start but later its more about skills and flashy fights and less about social interactions and communications. Not my taste but you can give it a try. When fight keep going for 7 chapters... You can have excusse if you make an epic fight involving protagonist but this are just some climbing stones without brain making a filler. Good luck author my advice to you is to reduce lenght of the fight with climbing stones. Also when you keep adding skills wihout general system audience will only be able to track MC progress. I think you alredy lost your way there many filler skills not important for MC progress.
like it so far hope u dont drop it and continue to improve it :) hehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehhehehheheh
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the characters are goodly written plot is very good, I am all for it. just don't drop the story it will make me angry and disappointed.also why do you have the same story uploaded three times?good luck
top book for those who are interested in harem genre mc is great and not a naive idiot and the world is truly interesting . please keep updating author
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