the story at the beginning is really good, and interesting. The world building was decent and the mc is smart, and a little bit conniving. Everything is good until later on in the novel where then everything becomes kind of forced. Certain actions just don't make sense. one example of this is the character development of the mc from selfish loner(except his brother) to a somewhat caring and socialable guy. However, even with this change in personality he doesn't help others when it cost him nothing. like giving potatoes from his infinite potato shooter. I'm not saying that the mc should be a saint, but he actually gets benefits from doing this from the system which forces him to do good(sincere thanks helps him unlock OP weapons). The system itself just seem to stop working later on after the mc copy enough abilities and just doesn't trigger quests that much. Some situations are written in a forced way to make the mc act in a certain direction, which to me ruins the emersion of the novel. Even with these flaws I feel that this is a decent novel compared to others on this site, so check it out if you want.
I've only read only the free chapters which are about chapter 51 at the time that I'm writing this review. If you like smooth writing, mmorpg, fighting, grinding, type of novel then this is for you. Writing Quality: You can pretty much read this novel smoothly and there's little to none info dump so that's 5/5. Stability of Updates: Although I've only read the free chapters, I always get notified for updates so it's pretty stable 5/5,World Background: It has unique classes or "path" as they call it here and it seems like every person have their own unique classes. So far this seems like a western fantasy with goblins, dungeons, elves, dragons, and etc. In these 50 chapters, they haven't talked about kingdoms, who's against who, famous adventurers, or anything but it has hinted about factions. But I still give a 5/5 cause it's kinda interesting for me.Story Development: The story is going well for the first 40 chapters but to me, it felt like the plot was forced when they went in a dungeon so 4/5.Character Design: Characters have unique classes, especially MC. MC's class is pretty fun and gives a lot of freedom to let the one who owns the class be creative. However, when they were about to go to a dungeon, it felt like the MC who was being developed in the first 40 chapters went into ruin at least to me. In the first 40 chapters, the MC was portrayed as an eloquent, smart, reckless but on another side of the coin can be seen as courage type of guy. But when they went into the dungeon, it felt like he gave up easily. Overall: I would recommend this novel for people who likes mmorpg stuff.
I just want to lower the rating a bit. I cringed a lot of times and I didn't even cross 20 chapters. I tried to bear with it but the cringing started to hurt so I can't read any further. I picked it for it's high rating, which is definitely exaggerated.
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Writing quality is good, story development in this early stage is pretty good as well. Character design, updating stability and world background is satisfactory
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