Incredibly boring, the mc does things just because the author says so, he doesn't have any motivation or desire, he just exists and reacts to the system.His "peak cultivation" means nothing because mr.author was smart enough to downplay it right away by introducing this so called world awakening, his cultivation is so irrelevant that he shows it off in chapter 9 just to save a girl he doesn't care about (oh by the way, we have the out of touch boomer: "it's just a woman" kind of writing so expect every female character to be one dimensional shells and massively objectified)
A hooking synopsis and interesting character design. The world that the author built here is truly fascinating. Character interaction is also well-written and the very concept of this story is intriguing. Good luck, author! Keep up the hard work!
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Woow, Simplemente Increible. Una vez Comence a Leer no Pude Detenerme es Extremadamente Interesante e Increible esta Novela.El Desarrollo del Personaje, El Mundo e Incluso sus Poderes es increiblemente Interesante.
First of all this is a great novel and I will continue to read it. That being said my following criticism should be seen as constructive and not judgemental or destructive.1. Forgetable/Mobs characters receive to much words and in certain cases their traits and mannerisms becomes indistinguishable from the main character. The way the writer writes dialogue further exacerbates this, making it hard for readers to distinguish between characters - especially during dialogue.2. The MC becomes aware of knowledge that he should not be aware of. This can be easily fixed by simply indicating that he is not aware of this and that this is the knowledge of the future MC bleeding into he’s own recounts of his past, because technically the MC is writing his own story about his past self. The author is fixing this in later chapters.Those two points are my bigest criticisms.
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