The Ethereal Expanse

I also really enjoy the Setup and hope, that you can keep up the good work. It has a really unique worldbuilding and a good amount of Slice of Live which I enjoy. The Action has also a nice timing, so that you don't get bored and just thinking about what he will build next is keeping me tense.

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First is the obvious issue of grammar and pronoun usage.  Often times you do not know if the character is male or female because the pronouns used are switched for the same character over and over again.  For the most part I have been able to ignore that issue as there is a lot of content and for the most part I find the premise to be enjoyable.The story itself has one of the worst 'goldfingers' that I have come across.  Basically the MC is just a machine used to transfer various works from one universe to his current one.  He gets little to no benefit for doing so except to make money and fame.  He gets points to unlock other mangas from Universe A so that he can make an exact copy of it in his current Universe.  The only changes that he seems to be making is cut out filler chapters or to try to make the art a bit more up-to-date.  I have read similar works such as 'I am a superstar' or others like it where the MC is plagiarizing from one universe into his current one but at least there is usually some concrete benefit built into the 'goldfinger' such as skills or attribute gains.  If anything at least the MC should be given the increased creativity to make changes and update and personalize the work for his universe and situation.  Just maybe give him a sight bonus so that he can see the prospective popularity or objective quality/rating of the piece once it is created.  Don't just act as a copier for your system.

This is early to review but here I am. The novel has similar vibes to Pocket hunting dimension but story line is very different. The mystery to the dimension where MC goes isn't solved yet. The general outline is MC one fine day finds himself in a new world after his "death". MC feels he transmigrated. He has a system which helps MC to get stronger. During one of the missions MC dies and he finds himself back in his real world. He now thinks that everything might be a dream but isn't able to convince himself. When he goes to sleep(iirc) he again finds himself in this new world where he levels up. Behind the scenes MC is a young master of a very very powerful god clan I guess. Gears of fate and destiny are into play. MC was one of the most OP characters in past and although he successfully reincarnated he does not have his old memories yet. His mother father and retainers after confirming that MC is back again are gonna start a war, a war on the universe level I guess. So I have hopes that if author can continue this story it is gonna be a super bad ass action in future. Till now MC isn't OP. Just a normal level up thing going on and recently he received his bloodline or class I guess. Keep writing author.

I head out.  I ignore the red line.  I'm going to data storage.  I snag a fire axe on my way by.

" Apakah itu ramuan? " Tanya Raymond setelah melihat sebotol ramuan yang dikeluarkan Avian.

"No, It`s fine. I decided to use my single attack spells. So you don`t have to worry about them." (Ryu)

       However, he further told them that he will give whoever among the two  that is dropped five hundred thousand Naira as a compensation for the three months rigours he went through in the course of the gruesome interviews