One of the funniest novel i read s far and i'm liking it. Happy LOLing.Why the hell is this novel in some lonely corner in the website?5 stars out. ....................................................
Lost a lot of brain cells reading this, the world building is prettg nice, but after chap 21 I couldnt keep going with the other aspects.If you feel like it and has a lot of time to waste, you can read this, if not, well... You SHOULD get another one to invest your valuable time.
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Monillas: a human garbage.How should I put this into words? My roots come from various parts of Asia. Even though I had the privilege of being born in a first world country far away from the poverty and was allowed to flourish, go to school, have an easy life etc. I still know, hear and see the struggles of the people, family who were left behind. Poverty, desperation - they are all very real and well described within this novel.Granted, the grammar is lacking and would need an editor to work through it, but the idea and the story is still very well established and shown - and profoundly realistic. This is a story of poverty, desperation, and the things people are ready to do when they have no other options left. So far the story follows male characters. I can only imagine and fear what the story would be like if it was told from a female's perspective. All in all, I like how well the author writes about the reality of poverty in these countries. With editing and a better grasp on the English language, I'm sure the author can deliver wholesome and heart-wrenchingly realistic stories. Keep writing, author!
So far the story is amazing, I'm really digging the blend of military tactism and magic. The MC is solid, with the side characters being build in a way for future growth. I'm super excited to see where this book goes!
I thought it had a good quality description of the characters and the world around it , I just wish there were more chapters lol , keep up the hard work
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