A decent time waster, 140 character minimum really? A decent time waster, 140 character minimum really? A decent time waster, 140 character minimum really? A decent time waster, 140 character minimum really?
Truth to spill, after reading few hundreds of chapters I started to pity Chinese people now I understand why all of them are so afraid and hateful of others to be surrounded by such environment where they sneer each other and always sniffs at other people business and judges even if this is novel and not reallife but there is no smoke if there is no fire. That shows with all these Chinese cliche's where they bite each other with no thinking. After only reading this did I understood why Buddhism was created there like I say if there is no disease there is no need for cure and as China was rotting from within it gave birth to Buddhism without it I can't even imagine what kind of fate it would have. As for main character it feels like it's average only when it's needed that expert like deity mentality shows up and it looks like that author forgets about it, yes ı understand when it's around friends and family but when he adventure's it feels like character developed but sadly the only development is degradation.. If I knew about this I truly wouldn't had wasted my time on this. But at least this opened my eyes about Chinese abuses they live through.
Very interesting story with some unique ascpects that I haven’t seen in other novels with systems. Steady release too, only complaint is chapters are slightly on the shorter side compared to translated novels. Overall, highly recommend as it has an interesting build
Good novel, doesn't seem to have a good rating compare to other novels in trial for some reason. Maybe something bad will happen in the future? Idk I haven't read the mtl.
Writing Quality - 3/5 - It is a good read but it's painful to read each paragraph. For example, you always wrote in...Smiling wryly, (Name) bla bla blaNext paragraph: Looking at the interface, (Name,) bla bla blaNext paragraph: Sucking a cold bla bla, (Name) bla blaCritics: Next time, change the way you wrote for a better read, cause every paragraph is painful to read because as soon you made a paragraphs every time you made a comma ', ' the next word you wrote is always the mc name or side character name; After the comma making it cringe to read.Stability of update: 5/5 - Not much to say since the author put effort to update every day.Story Development: 4.5/5 - Minus 0.5 for the mc.Character Design: 4/5 - Minus 1 for the misinformation in the early chaps for the character design. I don't want to be racist so let's just wrap it up in mystery. World Background: 5/5- Very Good!*****Overall: It's a good read, definitely recommended for those wanted a humorous r18 novel. Some paragraph mistakes, typos, and misinformation. But it is still an enjoyable read. Definitely 5/5 for the author for creating such a brilliant work.
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Interesting, I was hooked from the start. "I hate doing math, it would be so much easier if we just fail the class and never worry about it again.""This line explains my life, i hate math too and i skipped math classes before. This story did numbers on I and I suggest you give a read. Please update more chapters.
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