76 chapters and there's barely any progress. You made a very interesting approach to transmigrate the MC at that old age but for me it was a stupid idea. The main point of cultivation novels was to set a level of strength to each cultivation. Since the author has put the MC as 20 he at least should have the ability to catch up to geniuses from the first couple of chapters to show that his talents are real not just some words the author came up with. The setting of the first problem was great for the MC but the MC not only has the MC improved only a slight he is now attaining one problem after another. Ridicule for the MC is fine but when you make the MC so small it diminishes the value of the MC. Do you really think that all the readers would read all this crappy story of yours just to reach the part where he can now be strong?
As, I reading your story in dr**me, I
was suggested to download this app for the completed chapters here. And now, I noticed this story it's kinda same as wrong number same author different names of the lead of the story. wondering why?
Do not make the stories you write too long. It becomes boring. The storyline becomes redundant And readers lose interest. Stay on the main storyline and characters. Do not divert the storyline either. And most especially do not divide a whole days event into 2 or 3 chapters.
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was suggested to download this app for the completed chapters here. And now, I noticed this story it's kinda same as wrong number same author different names of the lead of the story. wondering why?