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let me make it plain, i love this story.... and I kindly recommend this book to other action readers out there. kudos to the author and I can't wait to read more of the chapters.
This novel had a very good premise. I love military novels where the MC is a strong general/leader or is a cultivation/system novel paired with military. HOWEVER, it quickly turns sh*t. Cliches upon cliches, the MC is a beta cuck who attempts to r*pe a girl by chapter 9. He has an extremely overpowered system yet decides to slack off. I don't recommend this unless you like ecchi crap.
(Attention spoiler in the second half of the cons)First review ever here in Webnovel. But I must write something about this book. The story is amazingly frustrating, but also a very good story.I'm very conflicted.Big Pros:- The world background is just fabulous, not your typical apocalypse story. It is also very well thought, such good imagination. The author have all my support.The story is progressing, with a good plot existing.When a story is very good, I'm a man of few words, I don't have anymore to say than this. So don't get too discouraged with the cons, because it is just some points that does not take away the fact that, it is an excellent story.Cons that frustrate you sometime:- But, (there is unfortunately always a but) the translation quality is bad and confusing because of two translators working on it. Sometime the quality is almost machine-translation-like. Sometime the name of the fu ck'n thing is a blade, or a knife, or a machette or a I don't know what. Sometime mistakes about the level of a mission or the level of a beast. And a lot more.- My second and most frustrating problem is the characters. MC is not behaving like normal people would in such world, sometime too kind, save a lot of people, especially a girl or a woman and especially ones he knows. Yes girl because legal age of consent in China is 14 years old !!!!! But for our occidental mentality, it is a little bit revolting and disgusting. I'm doing my best going forward, but then there is harem. 100 chapters and 4-5 Ex's, actual GF, love interest, one way love, and every body else who want to leap on him and f*ck him to get in his harem and survive.Sometimes 2, 3, 4 or 5 chapters of story development to save a girl and than she dies. An arc of 5-10 chapters just to realize they're literally again at starting point even worse off. He accidentally pass by a camp , get angered because he find his ex ( but more exactly a one night stand rape, with developed feeling from the girl like always in China, almost every romance start with a rape my godness). So his ex is with a new boyfriend, but get him killed not even by himself but his new girlfriend lol XD. And in the way kills a dozen of innocents men in the camp, leaving a once happy and secure camp of more than a hundred not safe anymore. I won't ever started with the behaviour of the grils/BFs, that's a another big text and I don't have the energy to complain anymore lol >.<And so on, and so on.Despite, those frustrating moments, I really like the story though, believe me. And I will keep carrying on, continuing reading nevertheless and hope it don't get worse. Pray with me,Amen~Lord YoloNatss~
Information flooded his mind as the incomprehensible became reality. One must keep in mind that he is just a newborn child; even if he is a child born from the Flux Plane, the Flux Plane is a plane of constant chaos, making accumulating power a process of pure luck. It took eons just to birth a frail, wounded teenager in the lowest realm of existence, the Realm of Demons; in fact, this was a miracle in itself. Considering this, being birthed with significant intelligence would have taken an unfathomable amount of time.
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