*sigh*......such a great novel but it's constantly getting ruined by the endless amount of mysteries and some decisions made by characters are sometimes weird or just don't make sense just to setup plot points later *sigh*
this became enjoyable after chapter 100, after chapter 150 became even more. The writing gets better and better, the bad point in this is the fake harem and dense mc about the two women's who like him, also, the "generic" mc who can solve almost anything, but it's partly understandable in this kind of world and with the strategies and training he do.
Actually, I'm not really into sci-fi and mystery stories but I've read a few. This story starts out slow but flows smoothly with no sense of interruption between the dialogues and the scene playing in the plot. The characters are distinguished well with their own features and their interactions and reactions are very realistic which makes it easier for the readers to engage with the plot. I love how you describe the actions and the event with simple words but gives a very detailed image in our mind. There are no grammar errors, which is really a plus point. I make mistakes in grammar sometimes too and correcting them really is tiring xD and reading a story with too many spelling mistakes or grammar errors just makes the reading experience feel bland. So I really love this. The author has a good writing style and it keeps the readers at the hook to know what really is going on. I enjoyed reading the first few chapters and I will read the rest as well when I have more time. Great job! ^^
I had this book in my library for a little while. I finally click on it and see it says GreyBlueSparrow followed by a date. It’s on another one of your books too. I’ honestly pretty curious about that.
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