The Diary of Single Lady

A one-sided love always hurt. I hope Vanessa will find the courage to let him go

Well, I really want to give you full stars but even you said what you're not good at in your own review, even through all that you're still one of my favourite author here in WN, I just hope you keep doing what you're doing, and improve of course, and you'll be good, I really think this is one of the best stories out there, thank you for writing this and your other novels too, especially with what the world is going through right now...

Absolutely ridiculous!Planting cucumbers that's strengthens cultivation, fine-- But planting a piece of paper with fighting skills and growing a plant from it that grants said skill? I know this is fiction but god damn, I can only suspend my disbelief so far. Also the continuous *** jokes isnt funny even if the author writes it 7 more times.This web novel has little going for it, so of you're reading this just STAY AWAY. You have been warned.

It's realllllllllllllly good, I hope I can see more chapters☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️

Starts off extremely predatory, and then barely focuses on that aspect, but in the story it makes sense so not an issue yet considering pace of story and current number of chapters. Translation is trash and in the later chapters seems worse than MTL. Unless the original author was just very dumb. A lot of things are very unclear, the thought processes of some characters are inconsistent, but the story is progressing at a reasonable pace… kinda. Everyone is still in mortal stage, and foundation stage cultivators are considered a supreme fighting force. Not sure how well planned out the growth of the story is, but pretty solid start if you turn off your brain and just read the story. Also I think she is a crossdresser or thinks she’s a guy, but is a girl. You’ll know when you get there, because of translation it’s not easy to confirm

The story is very good, it may seem slow to others but there is a lot of world building, foreshadowing, character development. I like all the details, especially those about the power system and the world background. I woudn't mind to know even more about the world. The characters are also quite likeable in my opinion. I really like the style of writing, it flows naturally and it seems "clean". Also, I didn't notice grammatical errors, just a name switch between Heima and Henrietta in a chapter I think, but that is understandable.

I'd probably give my own story here 3.7-4-ish stars, writing quality has a few past/present tense mistakes, some writing errors and confusing sentences, and overly repeated words, but is mostly clear and 'enjoyable' to read. I think I did an okay job on the action, but I don't have enough experience with that to tell.There will only be one chapter for this. So obviously 5-stars.I only gave myself 3 stars for story development, as it's too short a story to really test any natural/interesting developments, developed as expected, maybe did an above-average job explaining things.I personally found the characters fun, and was somehow able to give them slightly different personalities in such a short story, nothing too multilayered. Can't really brag, but I think I made some fun, fairly well-written characters.I had lots of details fleshed out for the plot, world, city names, history, blah blah that didn't really fit in. Given how short the story is, I'm not going to be too harsh on myself over not being super detailed. Though I will say I should've described the fauna/landscape of the area and at least attempted to depict the alien world outside of a single building.Thanks for reading my review of my own story, now take off your pants and I'll give you a cookie.

I'm loving the mental games going on between the different characters. Kind of reminds me of Twelve Angry Men (being stuck in one room and trying to reach a consensus) and Death Parade (random people being forced to play a game with limited memories). Fun to read so far. Just a few grammatical mistakes, but it overall reads well and gets the suspense right.  Introducing so many characters can be difficult, but even with just 3 chapters, I have a good feeling about each of them. Looking forward to more and figuring out who the killer is!