The Desolate Blade

ROSCOSMOS. The scientist had been studying the sudden change in the fusion

Excelente abordagem do tema da luta do bem contra o mal, o autor brinca bastante com temas teológicos e o poder divino baeado em milagres, entrando em choque com o senso comum de um mundo de fantasia baseado em mana, que é só mais uma equação

Pretty good start. Could use a bit of editing for smoother transitions. The story moves pretty quickly and I feel like I’m missing some background information on the characters. It could be brought  in later chapters to make the story more well rounded. Other than that, keep up the good work author. This story has a lot of potential.

First 40ish chapters are a little slow because of the foundation being set up for the book, but after that it was amazing and I couldn’t stop reading until I caught up to the current chapter. Highly recommend giving this book a shot if you’re interested 🫡🫡🫡

No grammatical mistakes The plot seems to be going in a nice direction....kudos to the author for working hard.... on it.good luck ................

I'm totally loving this book. Definitely a must read 😜. Give post more chapters author you have my vote🙂👍.I almost feel like am in 3rd persons pov.