I love it! The plot is quick paced and full of tw6and turns. And just when you think you have it, a shock comes out of nowhere. All I am going to say to peak your interest is that the MC does in the first chapter.
1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled(Disclaimer if you don't like this review; It will be removed in the future, probably, if you guys give this novel enough nice reviews. Don't rage and be happy!) .
I've read until around 40 chapters in English and some raws, but not on Qidian (look up on NU for previous tl). - Only 568 chapters, so it's considered extremely short to invest your precious time. Read it if you have spare time, like the premise, or already read every other novels. - Not a cultivation focused novel, more like political slice of life. - Slow paced, but intelligent story. And by intelligent, I mean, even antagonist have a proper background & course of actions, not just mindless brute. - It is a harem. Not just a harem because someone is peerless beauty capable of destroying nations, but because they have a good character & skillset.
Writing quality started off alright, then slowly came to sh!t. The grammar mistakes (lots of em) come at around chapter 40. At this point, the writing is not even a fraction as smooth as it had been when the story started. Can't say much about story development since I'm only up to chapter 58. All I can say is that it's quite boring at the later chapters, like you can predict what's going to happen. MC's merry band is equipped with thick plot armour and his only goal is to lead them to build a shop where they can sell goods.? I feel that author is downplaying the sense of danger in an apocalypse. It's like I'm reading a book about a party in a videogame farming for exp instead of an apocalypse story...There's plus sides though, in the earlier chapters, the entire part showcasing MC's history was done splendidly, but it all went downhill from there. The author only uses MC's background to explain his skillfulness at killing zombies and doesn't touch upon it again. Is he worried about his remaining family or does he not care and wants to forget them? And the other main characters (his best friends) are not emphasised upon. (at least not at chapter 60, maybe they will be later). They seem like the bland side characters instead of the mains because the author doesn't put much of an effort to describe their relationship with the MC. Side characters are side characters. Up to chapter 60, we only now their names and their previous occupation or general information (she is a middle-aged woman!). World background is actually pretty okay. Typical zombie apocalypse stuff yada yada. I like what the author did with the system, and explaining that those who couldn't take the pain at the start became zombies. He could build upon this and slowly reveal stuff about how it happened and why the system is in place. I stopped reading at chp. 65 because of the bad grammar. If it's fixed, I may start reading again. The novel started off strong and i hope it can salvage it's quality in future chapters.
I really nice story .I hope you continue it. I like the way everything just go straight to the point without beating around. Keep the good work writer.
I was pleasantly surprised with this story. I was looking for a story with an anti-hero as the protagonist, and this gem fell into my lap. Characters are fun and believable so far (author has released 19 chapters at this point), the protagonist process himself capable even without a System yet, and i an intrigued to learn more about the world and our hero's poisons. I especially like how poisons give him an unconventional strength, which can let the author use unique effects to have the hero outwit his opponents. Looking forward to reading along with this one.
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