Sometimes I want to go psycho👿 and kidnap the Translator, just to whip him for more translations of this. Ugh! I need to punch someone from the excitement I feel. I ship Luo and Ye. 😍 I feel so violent and pent up. WOOOOO.Don't worry I won't kidnap you Translator.... 😏
I’ve read only until the 74th chapter but really couldn’t read further. The character interaction and development are horrible and it’s hard to find coherence. This reads like someone’s naive power fantasy where everything just falls into place because they have little understanding of other people. The conflict in the story is the MC versus his third-rate random filler character mindset; if not for the fact that there’s no actual other MC, this MC would have long been kicked to the sidelines and forgotten after ten chapters.
Okay, it’s not like I’m being ruthless, it’s just... a mess. I’m usually very accepting of novel ideas, but this is just a terrible assortment. Can’t make any sense of it, at first you can still enjoy it but it just keeps getting more and more out of hand. It’s the first time I felt that the author had absolutely no plan for the novel and just kept throwing in ideas as they came and hope that they fit together. Well, they don’t. I’m really disappointed because this actually had potential. The characters at least are reasonable. Oh well, some people have said that this is a good novel to pass the time while you wait for updates on your favourite novel, but for me it’s just a waste of time, you’ll end up feeling disappointed and frustrated when you drop it.Enough said, it’s just my opinion. Hope some people can still enjoy it.
Read it through 240 chapter, finally feels it was good chapter to give it early review. +the worldbuilding 9/10 : nicely explained throughout the the story and no unnecessary info dumps. +the supporting character 7/10 : most of them was very well introduced and some of them still carry aura of mystery to them.+the main character 6/10 : the mc (Vicente) was a neutral evil guy, he is ruthless to his enemy and caring toward his family. but he's character was sometimes feels bland like something is missing. +the plot progression 8/10 : nicely paced not too fast and not too slow but some of the subplot was really unnecessMy only gripe was in where mc and his group went to Pentagram hunting in the forest and they found the guys from magic academy who was attacked by beasts and decided to help them. no problem until this point although i prefer to let them die. but after this and up until the DEAL that he made with guy named joshua (chapter 293-240) because of pentagram that not even his was single the most idiotic and dumb deal that can be avoided. it makes me rethink all of his decision up to this point.
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