The Demented Alpha

This novel sucks, the characters are bland the world development and skills are non-sense and the author is freaking creating other accounts so that his novel’s rating is high.

good novel but ITS cursed cant deleted it Out of my libray ,....................   ............................................................

Very interesting!Writing quality: Very good actually, couldn't find errors, lots of vocabulary and nice sentence structure.Story development: *little spoiler so beware*Mc plays a game then doze off to find himself in that game. There are many like him and some even before. In the game they need to pay a loan and that's all otherwise it's gonna be a full-scale spoiler.character design: Yeah basic like every new novel. No uniqueness but that's ok updating stability: Yeah I think this one there's no need to say anything World background: Interesting premises, I read something rather similar where everyone kinda have an island for themselves but its dropped so I think that author is not even gonna know but yeah the background kinda similar.A lot of potential so I hope it gets picked

I liked this work, especially the first volume. The story is written in clear language. But in the second volume, I got bored reading descriptions of endless adventures in the dungeons. Thank you for your work, I look forward to further development of the story.

Author review 2.0 because everyone seems to be doing one and I thought I'd join in!Things to expect from this story...1. No OP mc that never faces any problems. I will add that Aurelia is very flawed and some of her decisions will make you shake your head. 2. An mc that acts her age. She's young and it shows! She makes mistakes and as hilarious as they may seem, she does learn from them...or at least she tries to. Wrong things she does at one point, do come back to bite her in the butt. But that doesn't mean she'll keep making mistakes, she's not dumb. She's just learning. 3. Friendship among characters that could be considered enemies or rivals. And yes this includes some reincarnates. Not every character other than the MC is an antagonist. They may have been at one point but Aurelia acknowledges people make mistakes, and she might decide to forgive them - even those that don't deserve it. Or kill them, depending on her mood. 4. Suspicious, sometimes paranoid MC. No Mc that know everything because they reincarnated and have two brains. This mc does not rely on plot armour, so expect lots of questions to be asked about things she encounters because she likes to know...stuff.5. Characters that have agendas outside the mc. Not every character revolves around her, they may be close but have completely different motives than she does. Some evil/scheming characters are to be expected.5. Character development for everyone, not just the mc. Side characters will have their own backstories and you will see them changing overtime for better or for worse. Even the mc changes!6. Romance! Much much much later on in the story, but expect it to be confusing and full of surprises.7. Slightly slow paced story. Its not slow to the point of crawling, but the first few chapters aren't super fast either because I was focused on establishing a character.8. Decent writing. I'm not saying it's 100% perfect, you'll get the occasional typo when I proofread too quickly, but I always go back and fix them. Expect some descriptive portions (I like using words to paint scary pictures). But other than that, its alright compared to WN standards...I think.Generally chapters should be between 1500 to 2000 words, some chapters just end up being longer than I expect 🙃

This story was quite unique and I totally loved it, the way events are written and the characters kept me hooked throughout the chapters, good work, can't wait to find out more in upcoming chapters ❤️❤️❤️❤️

FULL COPY OF FALLOUT GAMEMC IS TRASH.HIS LOVER FIND HER LOST SISTER AFTER SO MANY YEAR BUT MC RAPE HER THEN HE SAYS TO HIS LOVER THAT HE WAS HOT HEADED BUT WTF..HIS LOVER FORGIVE HIM??ALSO HE BANG EVERY GRIL HE SEE..ALSO WTF ...IN THIS NOVEL AUTHOR MAKE HAN SO GREAT THAT IT WILL MAKE U FEEL LIKE TRASH...ALSO ALWAYS LOOK DOWN ON JAPAN.NO LOGIC.STORY FULL COPY OF OTHER NOVEL AND FALLOUT GAME.MC IS NOT SMART..SOME TIME MC IS SUPER SMART..ALSO A GRIL COME TO HIM AFTER SEEING HIS MONEY..OK MC BANG HER BUT WTF HE ADDED HER IN HIS HERAM.ALSO THAT ALWAYS TAKE ADVANTAGE OF MC'S MONEY AND FAME.HE ONLY THINK ABOUT SEX..DO NOT CARE ABOUT HIS WOMAN..ALSO PLOT ARMON IS TOO TOO THICK..MC BEAT A ARMY OF 1000 WITH 200 PEOPLE EVEN THOUGHT 1000 ARMY HAVE MANY TIME POWERFULL ARMS..ALSO NO POLITIC...AND MC TRUST WOMEN TOO MUCH ..ONLY ONE WORD MC IS LIVING TRASH.DONOT CARE ABOUT HER WOMEN'S FEELING..

But this time she couldn't tell the reasons behind her sadness then no matter how much she wanted to run into her mother's embrace and cry out her pain.