The Dark Alpha's Unwanted Luna

this novel is so dead so boringI can't read it anymore I tried telling myself something is better then nothing but this novel is so so bad.

The story is way too lackluster compare to the previous game trial runs. And I dont think this novel will have a good long-term story. So don't pick this!!!

It is an overpowered protagonist story but the author manages to keep the story interesting,unlike all the other OP protagonist story’s, keep up the good work work authur.

As much as people may not like the idea of how the Mc tempers his body, you have to remember it's a fictional story. I can't speak for others but I focus more on if I enjoy the world and interactions of the people than if it seems logic in reality. and honestly, it's great writing quality. An immrrsive world and a story I can get behind, give it a try if you feel the same.

The whole story is all about one dude cultivating and doing his best to stay alive in the cutthroat world of cultivators. He tries his best to cultivate, ignoring most other things in life other than cultivating, trying his best to not have enemies, and pretty much try to stay alive. Every realm he cultivates into he gains extra lifetime, but still not an immortal, so he has to cultivate more. And when he becomes immortal, the story ends. Rather cliffhanger type of ending, but I suppose it was expected since the title already describes the story.

Now, this doesn t deserve the 5 stars, i enjoyed it, but it s not even 3 starsWriting qualityIt s well, quite bad, in a chapter the translator user "young daoist priest" like 10 times in a chapter, and a lot of words are just used again and again instead of changing them and making the story feel more smoothly and have a diversity.. a lot of stuff seem out of place too, i think the translator is quite lazy, but i still gave it 3 stars as it s readable and not many grammar mistakes. Story developmentNow i gave it 3 stars, it s moving quite well, not that fast and not slow either, as far as i read he already got the first expansion, and did some stuff there and there, although everyone seems to either attack him or not attack him, it s lacking regarding that and especially characters. Character designNow, i only gave it 1 star because, all of them beside like 3 people are 1 dimensional, and those who aren t, their way of talking feels forced, they say stuff they shouldn t do, they do stuff they shouldn t do, it s just out of place.. And we don t even know the blood demon's name at the chapter i left (like 39).  Update stabilityWell, i started reading this yst, and from then till now there s no new update, it s been almost 2 days already, but i still gave it 3 stars. World backgroundI don t rlly know what to say here, not too much not too less, we know where this happens, what s around it, i still don t know or i didn t understand about the sects around, where they are located and stuff like that, neither we know the planet we re located, overall it s quite average so i gave it 3 starsOverall 2.6

Webnovel is soo cheap now, even trial read are now 40 chapters with 20 fuccking locked chapters. even then good novels are abandoned, picked novels included. what a sad life, they're not only licked the plate clean, table and floor too they lick. pathetic

I love this novel !!!+Chapter pls…XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP XP