The author has nice concept and a genius perspective in writing a story. Sure, there are some tiny errors but a little more hard work will help the story go far. Good luck author
Write a review Reading Status: C12Writing Quality: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ Nearly perfect without any grammatical error (in my opinion)Stability of Updates: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ (Nothing to say here)Story Development: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ One word ''SOLID'' Character Design: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ A Transmigrator with a load of knowledge from the past. I quite like the Initial Impression and action of our MC World Background: ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐ ''ORIGINAL''The total score: 5.0
Hello all. I have been a vivid reader of webnovels for a long time. After reading so many fantasy novels, I always wanted to write one of my own. So this is my first try. I know the chapters are small. Trust me they felt longer when I initially wrote them. I will work on the length. Looking for honest reviews.
This is a really good book and I like the characters ( cause their personalities and the shit they do are pretty relatable) but if he’s streaming I think it would be great if you just give some highlights of the games like you’re currently doing and if we have fight scenes in the near future don’t extend it for like 7 chapter (like some other books I know of) as it would be a major turnoff. The pace is good and he’s not hunting for pok-cough I mean women so that’s nice. I think there should be a little more world background as we don’t know much about it but it’s nice to read overall and easy on the eyes.
I love the amount of details during the gamble. Even though it took a few chapters to cover. But I think it's important to the story plot such that it adds a realistic point of view of what makes us human. Human by nature are curious creature, but we are also very greedy. Only a few are able to control that. I love how the author shows the danger of wanting more (greed) using gambling as the beginning centerpiece to the story. While reading, I feel the emotional and physical toil that jose feel. It's very personal. Yes, even if you have a job it's doesn't guarantee one's success. As for boss yanlei, damn, I wanna smack so bad! I really hate him! The author did a good job in making his character (thump up) However, with the main character being Allaine Monillas I feel like not much of him is being shown yet. But the first few chapters so far does set a good foundation (setting) for the plot. Will be expecting more of him in the next coming chapters.
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