The Cruel Rejection

couldn't pass page one. grammar errors.

Its so disappointing, this story is all over the place. The grammer and telling of the story is horrible. It jumps from one scene to another and leaves ppl hanging. It even mix the characters name. everything is so vague. I gave up.

English is NOT the authors first language. Read at your own cost and waste of money lol

It's not finished though?

Thanks. I like anti heroes too. I'll give this a try then.

Enjoyable. Wholesome romance so far. I am looking forward for more update.

Oh hey it's you again

Right, there is that. For me it wasn't the main issue though, and while it's hard to create original content these days, here it was pretty much copying familiar stories and scenarios for what's been popular the last 20 years or so for writing all of the tales (scenario arcs), which kinda makes sense if you look at it as a fanservice to the original writers/creators. And while I wasn't enjoying every one of those arcs, I was more upset about the 'fan service' to the (changing?) audience of this story, where the main plot line was increasingly interrupted and populated by ever more irrelevant female characters, which made me question the target group of this novel.

Please update more than 2 chapters. I really like this book but the slow updates will lead readers to read other books hence losing interest in this one.