Dante: então vou fazer algumas missões mais simples primeiro, mas isso fica para outro dia, vou dar uma olhada na casa primeiro, e quanto aos itens que combinamos?
The story is well-written which shows the skill of the author in writing. It has a solid world background but putting a lot of introduction for the first chapter makes the intro of the story a bit low in the intense aspect. The storyline caught my interest so I hope you can make the story more exciting in the following chapters ahead since there are only 3 chapters currently.
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