The writing is lower on the spectrum but I won't say trash to others novel I read. However, from the comment I read so far it seem that it really bad before he got an editor. There might be fews errors stil in need of tweak.What kill me is the characters and the setting;to be specefic it would be system. The system is absurd as it can summon gods yet it can't fucking heal the main protagonist. Then the wolf ****en neuter that leg. I couldve deal with a weak character but strong in other areas but when the MC solve the problem through plot Amor by allying with the wolf that made him pratically dead as a character and more of a puppet. The otherhand, the puppeter isnt well thought out or I'm expecting too much from a system novel. It doesnt give ant expantion of the system and why it all Earth(Greek) Gods. For example. Were the Greek God s ever worshipped in the the new the planet or is the system just generating/ acquiring Souls with potential of being gods with the geberated menories basebon the epics og hero and gods from Earth. Also, it seem that that MC could be more than a mortal or a mere God base on the system method of empowering him through collecing ,training, and battling wild goddesses. Also, i wouldnt have mind if he sacrifice a leg for godly speed or something but no he had to plotamored into allying with a wolf that would eventually be enemies. I say that because the wolf or Lyon; whaterver the greek word for wolf will be enemoes base on his backstory and MC identity of work traveler from a modern Democrat developed country which destroy the envirement and treat animal as pet as well. So it pointless and meanless other waste of time .******Note I haven't got passchapter 50
A KILLER, A TRANSPORTER, A TREASURE HUNTER, A GLUTTON HE IS NO DRAGON OR SUPERMAN BUT HE IS MUCH MORE HE IS NONE OTHER THAN ''EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEELLLLLLLLLLL''......HE EATS SHARKS FOR DINNER,,, WHALES FOR LUNCH ......... HE TRANSPORTS FROM PC'S TO NUCLEAR BOMBS THROUGHOUT THE WORLD ....... HE IS A INCARNATION OF THOR USING METEOR HAMMER HE DESTROYS CARRIERS TO SUBMARINES BY RELEASING THE THUNDER ......
Just a little grammar mistakes but I liked how these jokes are presented. Good work 👍 . How much do I need to write seriously they should really reduce reviews writing length!
Amazing story. The most unique thing about this story is that it is written by a Pakistani and written in Pakistani style. Good luck author in writing more novels in future
This is a transmigration novel and the mc have a system. It's somehow similar to another novel titled 'I Really Want to Go Against the Sky'. The mc continue to level up without doing anything like cultivating and such. He level up just by walking, drinking, etc.The difference of this novel is that the mc is not the only transmigrator. There are many more transmigrated people and all of them also have their own systems.I like the novel first but I got disinterested because of the way it is narrated. It's confusing. Sometimes you can't distinguish whose point-of-view you are reading.
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