to be honest, has high potential, but a lot of wording mistakes along with number mistakes that pull you out of wanting to continue reading. the kids seem to be way more mature than they should be at the described ages. and alot of other small problems and consistency issues.
Hey I'm nescafe writer, nice to meet you little LYTA, can I have a few words with you about your chapters, drop a contact method, FB, discord, Gmail etc
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