The Binding of the Dragoon

please update?

I really wanted to like this. the concept is very interesting.  but unfortunately the story has some major flaws.  one the author chose to use parentheses to indicate when people are talking - which gets very annoying and hard to read.  the story also tends to jump.  overall messy but has promise

"Well… Now, look, she is looking this way, this is bad oi!"