The Bg God. The God Of The Land

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Story is way too rushed.It has potential but it is ruined by the fast pacing. Everything is happening neck to neck with no break in between. As such, there are many plot holes left.

Just finished reading this book and, good gods, this by far one of the best if not the best book I read in a good while. To be honest, since there is a lot of works that are filled with harem, lemons and similar stuff, so I got tired of it and now that I found this book, it's so good, I finished it in 3-4 days and the best part (for me) is that there is no harem, lemon, basically 0 romance and a lot of good quality story. So if you read this and haven't started to read, then I recomend this work 100%.

The story is still at its infant stage, the characters are still developing. Unlike typical novel where mc starts to take chance or luck encounters of the novel's mc ,the mc is walking his own path. Though not much is introduced in the the initial chapters, the detailed development of mc power is shown.So, I am expecting more from future chapters. I will leave with 5 star for now. Looking fordward to future chapters.

Vampire premise is interesting and different. I'm not sure how I feel about also adding a full dive video game aspect to it though. I'd rather one or the other, but it's just a personal preference.A few too many characters introduced who don't seem to have much relevance to the story or real originality that distinguishes them from any others that could be swapped in for them.The MC is rather funny at parts, but I feel like he's lacking some depth to his personality. His reactions and thinking seem somewhat surface level, and he's just doing things as events come to him. Maybe we'll get more of his backstory and deep/real reason for his motivations later. This impression is just to chapter 14.But most importantly on a reading fluidity aspect, there are a lot of blocks of text. There isn't enough paragraphing, especially with the dialogue where each time a person speaks, it should be a new paragraph. These blocks of text are long enough that it even bothers me reading on a computer, so for mobile, it's especially disgruntling.Besides that, the pace and rpg elements are nice, and the writing doesn't have many blunders in terms of grammar and such. Good job so far!

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