The grammar in this one is not very good. I have read up to chapter 3 and I just can’t continue this with this one. Examples would be lyme use of loose instead of lose. Other examples would be incomplete sentence structures.
This book is good like tour others The Rebel & To Betray the Mafia King
I don't like you book The Girl he Banished & Death wolf. although you make good endings but Love shouldn't be poisonous
& try to change the stories, I can see the similarities in ur books all the time
Your style of writing is amazing. You need to change the clashes between leads from stupid misunderstandings to something that will end up special in 1 or 2 episodes. not long lasting stupid misunderstandings. that was frustrating.
You are good, you can do better. I trust tou
Scar is becoming a very annoying characters. She is acting like a spoiled child. So, he didn't return your LOVE when you were his Beta. Maybe he also didn't know how he felt then.
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I don't like you book The Girl he Banished & Death wolf. although you make good endings but Love shouldn't be poisonous
& try to change the stories, I can see the similarities in ur books all the time
You are good, you can do better. I trust tou