Done reading this WN. What is good in the story is the value of giving importance to those around you. Actually, the story has a lot of moral lessons that you can take. There were many negative comments about this WN, which made me more interested in reading it. Some said the scene was predicatable. Dude, that's not true there are plot twists upto the end, you better continue reading. The ending of the story is very reasonable at the same time made you wonder if the author will make another story for the Talen Family. Overall this is very good story with good moral values to take.
The grammar is as if it's a 4 - or 5 year old child, which doesn't allow the story to flow it makes the story more difficult to read. If the grammar and spelling, along with having the adult characters speak as adults do, are edited correctly, this would be a much better book
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ps. RICHARD ENO who the h*ll are you? 😆