The Antagonist

Aku ngerti kenapa tiba-tiba jadi begini. Aku ngerti kenapa kamu tiba-tiba muncul lagi dan mau tunangan sama aku. Aku ngerti perasaanmu sama aku dan aku menghargainya, tapi aku tidak biasa menjawab perasaan ini terlebih dahulu padamu. Jadi, lebih baik aku menjawab ikatan pertunangan yang bisa menguji lebih dalam agar aku bisa menemukan jawaban yang tepat untuk membalas perasaanmu padaku.

Liz: WELL THANKS FOR THE LATE INVITATION RIA!! I APPRECIATE IT VERY MUCH!😡😡! come on Liz think fast, think faster. How would you even kill a bear in this world! Aaa the big tree.

my name is lucy, call me sister lucy

Only shooting stars break the mold

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

The initial chapter was good. Endearing kind of good. I like how you describe your characters author! It's well presented and they gave me a picture of who they should be. I mean you gave them life and not some bland description of their actions.  And I think that's really really nice. Good job there author! Keep up the good work!

Good writing, interesting and fast start to the story.

MVS is still one of my best reads and jks is already an expert for giving his readers a cliffhanger after every chapter.Now it's time to start a new system book!!!!

It's a really good storie with many twists and epic Moment's.I hope you make more of it and continue.

The story and plot are both overall fantastic the story of course has a few typos amd homophone confusions ... Nonetheless it is fantastic so far