Hello everyone, Author here,~-As some of the people here, I have already made a few other novels other than this one.-I accept criticism, but please do so with quality, not because you guys hate my novel.Writing Quality:Stability of Updates:Story Development:Character Design:World Background:I Appreciate it especially for those people that would do so~ not because of writing quality, I will get 1star... That is something I hate the most~ I just wish that I would at least hear what it is that makes my story, a 1 star one!
I like this novel very much because all the characters that I have come across are described properly and every section of people can read and understand easily without any difficulty and I also like fantasy and adventurous novel very much...
I'm forty chapters in, Translation is mostly ok, some pronoun issues. What is a "Ron" warlock?Its hard to properly rate a series after only reading a few chapters. But its been a fine introduction to a comedic story. Characters seem shallow but we'll see how things develop.I'm not currently comfortable using my FPs on this series, not unless it's picked up and won't spend coins unless there 100+ chapters.Reading the initial 40 chapters is ok and I recommend it
Shameless Author here, with a shameless review.I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly.Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you!https://rb.gy/5s05wc
I've read all the chapters and the story is good. It's obvious the author puts in a lot of work and has everything planned out and written in detail.Its a typical isekai story but it's better than most in terms of plot and characters.I really like the protagonist and the other characters as they add more to the great world building.The story has a lot of potential, however unfortunately it was sometimes hard to read as the writing quality wasn't the best. There are various grammar mistakes and the descriptions of things and characters made it hard to understand.Sometimes the diaologue was too long and felt heavily expositional. I guess English isnt the author first language which is fine. I think the story would benefit from a proper and thorough edit, in terms of grammar and plot, because this is a unpolished gem!I hope the author will continue to work hard and keep up the work!
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