That Day

I do not understand by those who give a negative rating.Did you read this novel because of TAG • R-18?You feel as though the initial 30 chp is rubbish and unimportant. If you want to read the novel of an immortal who immediately sex then read 'immortal only accept female' and you can masturbate to your heart's content.Author I think you should exchange the [R-18] Tag with [Mature] to repel the muddling flies.

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The concept of a world where one's worth is determined by godlike entities called Archons is an intriguing premise for a novel. Raith's story of being chosen by the Archon of failure and death, and his journey towards becoming a hero, adds an element of excitement and adventure to the plot. The idea that death is not the end for Raith, and that his first death changes everything, creates a sense of mystery and anticipation for readers. Overall, this section of the novel sets the stage for an exciting story with unique world-building and an interesting protagonist. [I am looking forward to reading more and discovering where Raith's journey takes him next.]

Good start, the update pace is good. The system seems to be a little arrogant, MC seems to be a over achieving Joe undeserving of the system like the otaku MC's.

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I saw hey potato comment on this and I had to check it out(, I love her/his work so much)  nice book Please speed up your update rate,I would love to read it till the end🤗🤗🤗

It's a nice book here and you should keep it upBut seriously bro you have to work harder on the updating of chapter aspectI think if you do that your can become better