Irelia amaze with this vehicle. She going inside and check various thing on it. She also checking the storage. Try put in and out of the item inside of it. I also showing the magic array without using the needed the specific attribute. Going back to her office. Daphia already done register and there a gold card in her hand. She so happy pass the test. After that, Irelia pass me a paper, feather and ink to write the method for build the carriage I showed earlier.
Walking down the street he noticed the atmosphere full of life, every person was busy either going or coming from work. Shops opened and many shouts filled with advertising joined the already noisy street. Life was always like this in any city, noisy and full of vigor everywhere you looked.
I'm loving it so far despite only having 2 chapters, my only recommendation for better reading is that you should make the description of Kara or the other characters more informative, so readers can imagine them more clearly.
The first chapter is very intense, the beginning is interesting, I feel like it's going to be a power struggle. Wen Ran promises to be an overpowered character. The writing of the story so far is good, with astronomical work behind it. I hope the cosmology of the universe will live up to the expectations.
I'm excited to see how the author develops the characters throughout the story. Also, I'm intrigued by the author's use of language and storytelling techniques.
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