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Writing Quality: 4 StarsThe Author personally thinks that the writing quality is decent. However, the grammar is a bit meh...English is not the Author's first language. He had never mingled with the English-speaking community before, and he had very little time to take English lessons since language was not his major. The Author could do this well thanks to his experience reading many English translation novels.The way the Author wrote the ICEE is a bit troublesome. First, he wrote it with own language and then translated it with Google Translation. Finally, he edited it using Grammarly. So, please understand if the writing quality is not very good.Stability of Update: 2 StarsWriting novels is Author's hobby and side job. Meanwhile, he still has his job. Therefore, the stability of the update is not guaranteed and satisfactory. However, he still strives to write whenever free to satisfy his dear readers' curiosity.Story Development: 5 StarsThe pace of the story is relatively slow. However, it was steady.The development of the main character's strength is also a little slow due to his cautious nature. However, it would progress rapidly once he discovered a cultivation technique to conceal his cultivation base.Besides, the main character also still has many things that he must upgrade using his Cultivation Points besides his cultivation base. Although increasing the cultivation base is essential, improving other aspects is no less important.Character Design: 5 StarsThe main character made by the Author is humble, cautious, and steady. However, he is definitely not a soft persimmon.The Author doesn't intend to make the main character low-key. He just wants to make the main character no different from other relatively talented sect's disciples. Still, he is a protagonist, after all. No matter how ordinary he was, he still had some aspect that made him stand up among the people.Apart from the main character, there are also some interesting side characters and some cheap enemies.For more information, you can read it yourself...World Background: 5 StarsThe Author said, "It was good... I think."

I loved this novel in all it's entirety but he just stopped updating his novel no warning and i have been checking in for like 5 months NOTHING absolutely nothing it's making me sad for me to see my most favorite novel just stop like this and i am heart broken and hope to see one day this up and running again but for me you have lost a watcher. i may come back but i am unable to see that there are no more chapters it's crushing my dreams LITERALLY i have had no dreams sense this stopped :( i hope to see this one day i may come back but not anytime soon

This was my first ever introduction to ddlb and it did quite well. After reading the existing chapters (20) I felt like i knew what was going on at all times- even though I had no previous knowledge of ddlb. I have since gone on to look for other novels with ddlb and have felt quite underwhelmed. I feel like i have bee spoiled by this book. None of the other books i read, other than the author’s other story, come close to the storytelling experience this novel gave me. I have nothing bad to say about this story other than the need for proper tense consistency.

In one chapter he launched an attack and turned all five opponents into a bloody mist. Then the next chapter the commander is miraculously alive after being turned into a bloody mist and leads his sect to attack. I think that should set you expectations for this novel.

Writing Quality = GoodStability Updare = Really GoodBut as for the rest.. Bad...Paragon of destruction = Paragon of averageFirst point, MC doesn't seem to be logical at all, he threw golden opportunity to train just because he want to find a shortcut (that doesnt exist) or can't handle the training.Second point, MC does stupid logical decision even if the best answer/solution is slapped at his face, he goes full retard because of plot (?)Third point, the MC is AVERAGE, he doesnt have any talent whatsoever; what he has is the forbidden real, that from what is shown is not even that 'legendary', an example of a (my imaginary) scale:Common - Rare - Rare+ - Epic - LegendaryThe forbidden realm is only at Rare, or at max between Rare and Rare+But the worst point is that 'this advantage' that he has on the forbidden realm IS USELESS; he has a forbidden realm that is only mentioned at the start of the novel and during chapter 50 from what I understood, and nothing. We know nothing about the forbidden realm, what it is exactly, what type it is, NOTHING, he doesn even use it; and we are already 100+ chapters in.

I love this! Amazing! Amazing! Awesome!This is an amazing romance story for male lead.Where had this been all my life.Also there are hidden vibes that the girl might be a yandere or reincarnator or something.All in all, it's a pretty amazing story.This better get selected!!This batch is so much better.This story is also really awesome.

Author-san-special-five-star-review!!! 1st version! I want to say it’s the first and only version, but knowing me, I’m prob gonna have to change this one day or another. Anyhow, let’s get to the review. STORY DEVELOPMENT – ToneOkay, this time it’s really gonna be a grim-dark story. I know I said the same last time and it turned out to be a feel-good slice-of-life, but trust me, alright. Just read like, the first 2 chaps and you’ll see it. Obviously, it’s not gonna be all gloom and depression. Slice-of-life will happen (since I love it), there will be comedy, romance, action, adventure, and all that good stuff.  One more thing I wanna add here is the mysteriousness of the novel. I know it sounds kinda pretentious coming from me, calling my novel mysterious and all, but what I mean is just that I’ll try my best to withhold certain info from the readers.The reason for this is that I ****ed up a lot on SotNeW, by explaining every detail of the story as they appeared. Not cool.STORY DEVELOPMENT – Pacing.Things will happen faster this time around. Last time, whenever I wrote a scene, almost always, I would stick it into the story without deleting it (even though they were completely filler), but I’ll do it this time. Scenes will die, since I’m gonna have a proper stockpile this time around. And also, Author-san ascended, and like, learned how to skip useless parts in scenes. Very epic.STORY DEVELOPMENT – Side Stories.Different POVs and other stories will appear more. I’ll just say that. Also, depending on stuff, I might rewrite previously written scenes in the POV of a different character. I’ll try to make this clearer as we go about the story.Also, remastered Layla story incoming, pog. And yes, I’ll take a part from that and chuck it into the synopsis. He-he-he.CHARACTERS – MCMC will have an interesting character arc this time around, how about that? CHARACTERS – Side charas.I have plans to tie more side charas to MC’s story, in a more intimate and non-conversational way. And t r y … to develop their arcs in that manner, but I’m not sure how that’ll work out in reality. It'll probably be okay. Oh yeah, also, Romance~~WORLD-BUILDINGI mentioned this before, but I’m gonna try to withhold certain information, so their reveal will be more satisfying later on. I know the older readers will have knowledge about some details due to the rewrite, but I’ll try my best to keep things spicy for everyone.MAGIC SYSTEMThe fundamentals for this will not change, but I’m gonna add a lot of quality-of-life changes to the usage of Worlds. It will still be a Hard Magic System , but I’m gonna try and add a Softer side to it as well. SETTING and WORLD BACKGROUNDSome things will be uncheatable, but they’ll be much rarer compared to the previous version. This will add a sense of risk to actions and give birth to more interesting choices. MISCELLANEOUS STUFF-No harem planned.-There will be cliches, but I’ll give them my own touch. I think you'll like it a lot.-----Alright, I think that's it. Ask me if you have any questions ;3

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