Whoa. That escalated quickly. I knew something big was gonna happen but I was really surprised how the events had turned out. I wanna comment your writing skills. Your grammar is on point and your sentence construction is absolutely up to par. Really good writing.
Good story but I doubt we will see the system before the 40 chapters are done and I think the world background needs to be more detailed but other then that pretty good
The synopsis has the hook that I'm looking for, and for the love of god, my head ached when I read about genetic engineering. Although I hesitated to read it as I'm not interested on any science-y novels, the way the author wrote this story flat out slapped me with the reality. I shouldn't judge without reading the contents lol and that's how good this is. I'm actually waiting for the next chapters, so I expect a chapter soon! THIS IS A MUST READ!
This is another reason why there should be no civil war. The Sky Marshal wanted to gain political support in order to gain more power for the war. It would be funny, Ironic and a bit of karmic just if instead that our character gains the public and political support to the point that he is the unquestioned leader of the Federation. If we have a civil war then there will still be doubts. The treacherous Sky Marshal is literally giving us power on a silver plate.
"Both I "THE GREAT" Rubi and your mother "THE SUPERB" Safire now suspect that King Vegeta wants us dead. If you're seeing this message then both I and your mother have fallen to his scheme's and are dead and you've somehow managed to escape Planet Vegeta safely. This means you should now be fully aware of King Vegeta's treacherous nature."
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