Ok, so mc have a 'special' soul, he learned haki in minutes and for some reason he has mutiple personality disorder after merging with buggy's body. I have no problems with that, but when his bouty hunter friend shows up, the story starts it's own fanfiction. I don't like that. From that point on everything is not that fun to read.
This is going to be one of my favorite novels from now, I loved the way the author explains her characters in detail and interesting manner. The plot and story are very fun to read.
I have a divine tree up my ass!That's the only way to describe this novel.Author constantly strokes China's elongated schlongus maximus like it's his life throughout the trail chapters. Apparently it's a whole nationalism novel + savior systemAtleast in Earthlings are Insane, it was more Earth nationalism than Chinese nationalism, which I can bare. MC needs to "contribute" in order to gain potential strength. Yay.This is all just a pain in the ass, hence the first sentence of this review.
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Short review: Very fun setup with good characters and an interesting system.Long review: The writing is overall decent, but the author shifts around in tense too much to make it a natural read. The story development is excellent, with a good introduction and setting up the stakes from the very first chapter. The characters are very well developed, with distinct features, and their interaction feels natural. I'm not far enough to say a lot about the world-building, but it appears solid, and I'm interested in how the author is going to make the supernatural features fit into an Earth-like world.
Interesting to read, story development is a bit catchy and you would wanna hope to see where it goes next. Good work to the author....... More characters should be added though
This book has some margin for improvement.The chapters are really short. Still, the fact that the chapters are short make the story somewhat fresh and light, and this I like very much.But…The writing is a bit confusing a few times. I get that the author is trying to capture the scene in a… let’s say "spontaneous" way, but this strains readability, and curiously, verisimilitude.So far neither the characters nor the works have much depth, making it hard for me to relate to the story.All in all, not my cup of tea, but I hope the author keeps improving. Wish you the best of luck!
I smell something fishy..... Bakit parang kakaiba ngayon si xyrus? bakit siya yumuko sa coach niya e kahapon lang sinigawan niya ito?at bakit parang humihingi siya ng sorry?baka nag bago na yung timang na yun narealize niya na ang sama niya pa lang tao...pero hindi imposible talaga to,nanaginip lang ata ako kailangan ko sapakin ang mukha ko...(plak!plak!)....Aray!ang sakit nasobrahan ata yung sapak ko.
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