[This review adheres to the five different rating categories Webnovel provides. In order, Writing quality, stability of updates, story development, character design, and world background. I will separate these into different paragraphs for your convenience.]I rate the writing quality four stars. There isn't an egregious amount of spelling mistakes throughout the currently released chapters, and the flow of reading is pretty good with the exception of the first chapter. Hopefully, you can call me a doofus for saying that once my fellow author polishes it to represent his peak performance.Stability of updates is five stars. With an initial five chapters to start everyone off, I'm sure we can expect more at a steady pace going forward.Story Development is five stars. The foundation of the story was laid out both in the synopsis and the initial chapters. We can clearly see the suffering the protagonist must endure, making me want to root for him and hope that he'll come out of this terrible ordeal.Character design is three stars. No one in the story has a memorable appearance thus far in my mind, though they are quite animated despite that. They aren't cardboard cutouts wearing clothes, which is good, but they could certainly use some more descriptors.World Background is five stars. While laying down the foundation of the story, we learn a great deal of the world's history. It's a point of interest in the synopsis, and a cause of conflict in the story.The overall rating I give this novel is 4.4 stars. It's pretty good!
Hey author, I must say, you're developing a lot more than the first time! I can see your dedication and passion. Your plot is indeed unique, but the character is quite blah(reminds me of Saiki Kun). I don't normally read system stories but this kept me coming for more! The world building could be a bit faster but not going to complain about that, seen worse. Overall, it's great!
Each character feels real and the fact that it is a cultivation world but the main character isn't just running around face slapping people makes me so happy. The concept is original and I truly enjoy reading each and every chapter. Occasionally their are parts that the writing feels a bit off, but as the story progresses you see the author does as well.
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