THE ALPHA'S CORPSE BRIDE

Read 3 chapters. Really, all this is incoherent ramblings from a guy whose primary language is clearly not english. And then the Author also adds random pieces of texts in the chapter like: "Haha, the MC is so delusional he thinks he can just get stronger like that. Hahaha."Like, my brother in Christ, you wrote this shit. The MC is literally what you make him to be. If you yourself think that he is bad maybe you should idk, change it?That's all. Don't read this, writing style is dogwater, basicly zero world building, the MC just gets dropped in deus ex machina, the way to author writes down the MC's stat sheet is confusing and barely readable honestly. I really don't know what the hell people who like this are smoking.

This is a great story but there's not much chapters yet but it's a great start! .............................................................................

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Speed down the pace of your story a bit,  and add more conversational depth between the characters. Otherwise pretty good plot and have a potential to shine. Keep up the good work!

Started off with an eerily bang the Storyteller is so intriguing and the first chapter is everything. I feel bad for Ezra thought we're not entirely sure what he went through. Oberyn is such a cute little guy and i'm hoping for the best for this pair in this unknown 'earth'There's magic and seems to be different creatures. I wonder what fate has in store for them.The writing is easy to follow and so funny too with the interactions. Keep it up Author!