This Deserves an oscar... The character designs and names and how the author was trying to compare real life celebrities to characters was a out of place, but don’t misunderstand im really tired of those long chinese names that is hard to spell and remember compared to names in the novel like michael,gaya,claire and more is really making it easy to swallow. Tbh except that part everything impressed me. I think if you gave it a chance by reading 5-8 chapters you wont stop until you finished 😊.
Even if the magic concept of this story is good, the author does not have a good grasp of his story. Details are explained after the fact. A timeline constructed before writing would help the author to have a better grasp of his narration
Hey! author here, so I have to be shameless and give myself a free 5 star review, right?I hope you guys like this novel, it's my first time trying out such a genre so some things might be off, I can only know when you guys tell me so comments are important if you see any flaws.Also, this is for the WPC so please, if you can spare a few power stones for me, that would be amazing.I hope you all have a wonderful day!
Okay here is my review ...Wrting quality is okay not perfect has not too many flaws and very readable. As for Story Development... Not too many chapters as of now but I'm liking it's development for now for Character Design now is not your best MC and is actually laid back and down to earth Updating is Fast maybe 2 chapters every other day and for the World Background is not your typical Info dump every action the MC takes over all VERY GOOD definitely will continue reading and waiting for new chapters..
"I apologize, it's my fault I was in a hurry and didn't see where I was going." Liang Fu Jiu quickly bent down and picked up the contents before putting them in the purse to give back to her. Peering up at her face he noticed a large scar that ran from her cheek to her ear.
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