TAMING THE RUTHLESS BILLIONAIRE

Lily laughed as she thought it was a joke but it was actually true as Simon's butt was indeed frozen. Luckily he healed extremely fast and there was no more damage. As for the other demigod, Simon guessed that her heat and fire powers created a thin layer of protection.

No! Impossible!

「Therefore I'm sorry, but Miyako can't see this. I understand that you would be anxious to have a suspicious medicine used on you suddenly, but I want you to trust me somehow」

Shen looks back and saw that it was none other than Nyna; "Ah... No... I-I..."

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I have a feeling that this novel is going to be drop

But Nam's excited chants and screamed muddled his thoughts up almost instantly.

Hello, brother can you review my new book "Innkeeper Of Dead Gate" ...........................................................................................HELLO

SFGTMH is a well-written story with a lot of potential. TLDR: I enjoyed it.13 chapters in, there are a lot of typical guys, but the main character manages to stay refreshing with his dedication to fatherhood and a bit of hyperbole to how he reacts to situations.Setting-wise, I think the world could do with a bit more fleshing out, perhaps during the MCs' next downtime.It's a bit early to comment on character development, but I hope that the daughter especially is shown to change over time as she grows, given her age and the stressors of the situation.

Not really much of an expert in critiques, but so far I've liked what I'm reading. Though I just hope the MC doesn't get too much exposure with all the stuff he's been up to, cause that'll ruin the whole background character mysterious type get up.But all in all I like it. The story is good for me and I hope the author continues on with publishing more chapters. Hopefully soon ☺️