The story is nice and all... but sometimes it feels like you write in a hurry, I mean, you sometimes skip events a lot and also pass some nice points in the story so easily. it's as if you want to force the story to move faster. please don't hurry and take your time, let the story grow by itselfBut except that everything else is fine, I like the characters and the mysterious storyline.
It starts with a bang literally. I've never read a serialized fiction detective novel before and this is looking to be great! I'm already sucked in and a lot of chapters ahead!
[oh right l forgot something, for this time apocalypse it will be you human againt all animal and plant on earth, but don't think it will gonna be easy as l will give them the talent of evolution and high fertility rate without side effect for those who have low fertility rate, but you human don't need to worry as l was a fair man l will give you guys with five slot, four for ability and one for job just like in the game and you guys can't get the ability and job from killing animal or plant, but it only work once so work hard hahahaha]
I have sworn to myself to be a responsible father. Hangga't kaya ko ay ipaglalaban ko ang anak ko. 'Di ako papayag na basta basta lang siya ilalayo sa 'kin without giving me a good fight. My child deserves a father. I deserve the child, too. Kaluluwa ko ang inalay ko para lang mabuo siya. Kung hindi dahil sa 'kin, 'di siya mabubuo.
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