it's not really a novel, it's just someone writing a poem and wasting the readers time with only a few sentences per chapter, and even has locked chapters that are the same thing
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Started of really good but quickly turned extremely bad. In the beginning the novel was going in a good direction. He lives alone is a weeb and seems to know what he's doing. Nothing wrong with that but then the system forces him to go out and explore the real worldIn first chapters it was fine. He just walked around and visited famous places to get special talents from them. We also quickly learned that the supernatural existed in the real world and then the author suddenly decides to focus more on the real world than the Mc's simulations.While traveling the Mc encounters something supernatural he needs to start fighting it and shortly after his fight the government finds out about his powers. And as in all Chinese novels the Mc quickly becomes slave to the government.But if I go back to the simulations. The simulations themselves are pretty good but the Mc's reactions aren't. He holds grudges against people for what they did inside the simulations. He also becomes more stupid with time but the author tries to make him seem smart.If that isn't enough to make you read it then you should know that he doesn't actually transmigrate even after 200 chapters. In conclusion I would not recommend this novel to anyone.
This story has the potential to become something great! I hope that you are able to continue to develop the story at a good pace at the highest quality!
this story is fantastic, great even... but the main characters personality irks me and make me want to pull out my hair, as of ch 74 he can't decide wether to be a saint or be a manipulative person, his personality feels like it changed from the early chapters(not seamlessly) and he feels so much sympathy to every girl he comes across and every elf, so much so he is trying to build a nation for them... and he gets this huge resolve to save everyone in dire need, because girls he knew for like a week and was thinking about double crossing them the entire time, even on his way out, but decides he truly cares for them, despite them not thinking of him highly whatsoever at any point, a simp and rushed character, but the world building is nice and the story is kinda going along smoothly, already got a clear yet unclear enemy to beat and powers to progress with, I would rate it super highly if only the main character didn't decide sympathize with every female and every elf to the point of making a country for them all... haven't even seen a male elf yet
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