By the time he left the town, it was already 10 am, so he spent 2 hours doing everything. He felt it was quick enough, so he didn't mind much. He is pretty glad that every 'Player' was given a Virtual Map, since it can help him find places.
I usually don't review but this time its a must. World building is one of the best ones I've seen and I'm eager to see what you have else in plan (can you spoil me a little xD).As for grammar and writing, it's pure 5/5. Though there is a small meaningless mistake when counting his Nords and gold, but that doesn't really affect the story.Characters are 3 dimensional but I had a hard time imagining how they look (a mistake on my end) but there's character tabs so..As for the story, I was thinking of rating it a 4 but I rated it 5 after reading Awakened chapters because of the mystery and new antagonist.Now, the only problem is the stability of updates. PLEASE, if you can author-san update it more frequently.
Solid story so far, a few laughs, and great editing. I would recommend giving this one a shot. No idea of what kind of adventure we'll get in the long run, but I think we'll have an enjoyable time getting there. I don't know if it will end up in your library, but I know it's in mine.
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