Sad to say that the story for this novel has devolved over time. While interesting at first, everything is given to the protagonist conviently and its incredibly boring to read the same slice of life interactions over and over again. Who gives a **** that Da Zi is hungry? That's a minor detail
I bet he use cheat like the reality. Khu khu khu khu khu khu khu khu khu..... Anyone agree? Some people : We Agree! Warning : i just want to fulfill the 140 words challange.
The start of the novel was quite good and funny, but after he went to the Poison sect and became the head of the sect he started killing cultivators indiscriminately for the sake of obtaining points. All of this while having 100 initial chapters and the title of the novel about breaking trough too fast
This is a very great story The foreshadowing things are really awesome I mean there is really a need for this kind of army Kingdom world building otherworldly awesome books . what the **** is wrong with you over webnovel this is a book you must release at any fucking cost
I believe some more work can be done on character description. There are indeed some Grammer errors. Development of the plot and chapter to can get better. I have faith you have the potential to upgrade on this point 😉
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