Story is good, read the first 130 or so chapters on the other site.My complaint is that novel saga is yet again given a series i enjoy, they are inconsistent with their translation, martial god space for example was like having my eyes poked by a needle, you could tell different translators worked on different chapters because the terms would change every freaking chapter.
Great plot you have, although the boy is a bit weird... But that's okay, your mc after all... Please please please continue your great work or at least tell us whether you drop it or not... Don't leave us hanging out our penis without some pussy to sheath it...
It’s heavily inspired by Fey Evolution Merchant but still manages to be an entertaining read. Hopefully the main character doesn’t turn out to be an ABSOLUTE SOCIOPATH like in Fey Evolution Merchant.
A Top quality novel with with unique and interesting ideas , this type of novel is first for me. I hope the author continues and created more amazing chapters
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