"Everybody, report in." Steve ordered with a grunt. He'd managed to block some of the damage with his shield but, going off of the large blood spot on his side, he hadn't avoided all of it.
the story has a lot of potential. I’m really liking the plot, and the characters are interesting, though they could use a bit more depth to make them stand out even more. Some parts feel a little rushed, so slowing down the pacing could really help. overall I think with a few tweaks, it’ll be even better
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