Stars of the night sky

Synopsis and title is very interesting. Good world building too. I also like that there s a glossary at the start. Overall, very interesting story.

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Writing Quality: 3/5 Your writing is not bad but you have a few problems with punctuation, and a bit unnecessary wording. Updating Stability: 5/5 I put everyone's like this. Story Development: 4/5 The pacing of your story is good, please keep up with that. I like the plot developing, although I did tend to get a bit bored at times, but it did not stop me from fully leaving. Character Design: 3.5/5 (I have to round to four on the thing) I feel the MC to be a bit bland, but not all the bad as a character. I do like the other characters you added and how you give their personality through their dialogue. World Background: 4/5 I enjoyed the first chapter the most in the sense of world building, you did a good job at painting a picture on your world. In conclusion, the story is not bad, it is interesting but at the same time could get a bit boring. But getting past the boring part, the story is good. Keep up the good work, author.

This is very beautiful! I'm not really into sci-fi genre since I couldn't understand anything, but this book is really easy to read and understand. I'm still confused at other parts, but that just my nature since I'm not really reading sci-fi. I hope to see more of Theodore. And I'm still reading it.

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