Reviewing this book at 50 chapters and may change later if things change. 1- This author seems to be a master at taking what should be a couple sentences, and rewording it over and over again until it becomes a few paragraphs. Definitely a word count fluffer so far. 2- over use of the word genius, despite misspellings and grammatical errors. It’s hard to really view the MC as a genius, when the word is thrown around for almost every side character as well, and everyone they’re gonna fight. 3- thesaurus crazy. This novel is supposed to be centered around a couple 13 year olds, and a 15 year old. But when you read what the kids are saying, it’s filled with high dollar words left and right like an attempt at writing a doctoral thesis, but these are supposed to be basically kids. Its insanely unrealistic and annoying that the author can’t separate that. The novel being wrote like that is fine, but the characters will never be something we can attach to if they have the same bland tone of overused and several times wrongly used 4 syllable words. 4- simple over explanation. The author took almost half a chapter to explain the idea behind what’s essentially the 1 inch punch. Then immediately followed that with a summarized version, it’s already annoying, and repeating the same explanation multiple ways already has me skipping paragraphs, which isn’t a good thing when the goal is to get people sucked into the novel
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This is good. I highly recommend reading this story. The world-building is very nice. I read up to chapter 60 without noticing and was sad to find I read up to this point and there were no other chapters. I hope this is picked to be translated at some point because this is a nice read.
I have to say the story is impressive, please don't drop it like how most new authors are doing recently. I like reading novels from new authors. All the best
Your writing has truly captivated me - it's a masterpiece! Are you considering releasing a revised edition or exploring innovative ways to share your work with a wider audience?
May with a child like pout on her face,in a child like tantrum she raises her left arm and yells out "not this time" as the small dart like arrow was fired. Jake without hesitation used the dagger to move the arrow off to the left and let it get stuck in his left shoulder.
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