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For a guy who was apathetic even when he's sentenced to death became a warm goody good guy as soon as he play the game? what's up with flirting around with all these npc? its like he's hitting on to every woman he comes across.. MCs character can change, but shouldn't there be a transition period !here it happened instantaneously. what's wrong with MC to drop his advantages (dude is flame talent but won't train it?? )There's these random characters popping up without propet introduction too. plus what's wrong with his levels? isn't the prisoners supposed to be beta players !how come there are others with higher levels ! too many inconsistencies for me. i think it's not my cup of tea. l did liked the concept though. i don't know whether the story gets better in further chapters(i only read up to 23, so this can be considered only as a first impression). nice attempt bro. really appreciate your efforts.
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All that i saw nice in this novel was the different cultivation system, the rest being cliche and everything other xianxia generic type novels offer. What I see as a shame is that this novel has more fans then The Cell Prison that is something different in the good sense because after a while you get bored of generic bull*hit. Sometimes I question the reading taste of people...don t you get bored of the same type of novel with no innovation, again and again?
so far I enjoy it I actually really like the decision of trying to flesh out the world building first before getting more so into his individual development that you chose so far. Also really enjoy the fact that he found a companion early and the fact that this novel separates itself from other novels by making the main character a beastkin in the cultivation world. Keep up the good work I think it'll get the exposure it deserves eventually :) in all honesty I wish there was more chapters per week but I know that's not possible for every author considering you know, people have lives haha .
I think that whoever will read this book would be able to connect with it from the very first chapter. Very few books have capability to make the reader feel emotional and the author did a very good job in doing this. Recommended to all.
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